Comments for Interactive Representations of Information and Knowledge http://davidcheng.edublogs.org Sat, 26 May 2007 02:05:00 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Text with Supporting Visuals (The Prototype) by Maria http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Maria Sat, 26 May 2007 02:05:00 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/#comment-27 Hi, The information is fantistic. I am looking forward to you flash presentation Hi,
The information is fantistic. I am looking
forward to you flash presentation

]]> Comment on Text with Supporting Visuals (The Prototype) by Patrick Lai, Ka Ming http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/comment-page-1/#comment-26 Patrick Lai, Ka Ming Mon, 21 May 2007 14:12:08 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/#comment-26 Hi, I am Patrick Lai, Ka Ming, Just a few comments on your project. [About the PowerPoint Slides] - The PowerPoint Slides are neatly presented. - The "sound icon" seems to indicate that there may have narration, isn't it? - Will your group use PointPoint as the final file format? [About the Video explaning the "scripts"] - narration or on-screen text is recommended to be included in the Video. This helps to let the audience know what the main theme is showing. Hi, I am Patrick Lai, Ka Ming,

Just a few comments on your project.

[About the PowerPoint Slides]
- The PowerPoint Slides are neatly presented.
- The “sound icon” seems to indicate that there may have narration, isn’t it?
- Will your group use PointPoint as the final file format?

[About the Video explaning the "scripts"]
- narration or on-screen text is recommended to be included in the Video. This helps to let the audience know what the main theme is showing.

]]> Comment on Text with Supporting Visuals (The Prototype) by Dorothy Tsang http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/comment-page-1/#comment-25 Dorothy Tsang Sat, 19 May 2007 07:43:05 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/#comment-25 Dear David, The presentation is informative. But I still have some suggestions for your group: (1)the excessive content prevents you from having intense dedication to the task, would the presentation be focused on one or two topics of chinese culture? (2)instead of the introduction text in the "Calligraphy" part, would the picture of the "Four Treasures in the Study" be enlarged with the detailed illustration by the hotspot effect? (3)would there be some piece of work for the different styles of calligraphy and calligraphers? (4) would the demonstration movie for the skill of producing artistic chinese handwriting be added in the "How do people learn to do Chinese Calligraphy?" part? Hope my suggestions is useful to your presentation. Regards, Dorothy Dear David,

The presentation is informative. But I still have some suggestions for your group: (1)the excessive content prevents you from having intense dedication to the task, would the presentation be focused on one or two topics of chinese culture? (2)instead of the introduction text in the “Calligraphy” part, would the picture of the “Four Treasures in the Study” be enlarged with the detailed illustration by the hotspot effect? (3)would there be some piece of work for the different styles of calligraphy and calligraphers? (4) would the demonstration movie for the skill of producing artistic chinese handwriting be added in the “How do people learn to do Chinese Calligraphy?” part? Hope my suggestions is useful to your presentation.

Regards,
Dorothy

]]> Comment on Text with Supporting Visuals (The Prototype) by Mo Suk Ying http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/comment-page-1/#comment-23 Mo Suk Ying Tue, 08 May 2007 11:42:31 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/#comment-23 Hi, The powerpoint is clear to demonstrate the Chinese Culture. Although it may be a little bit difficult, the design is attractive. Hi,

The powerpoint is clear to demonstrate the Chinese Culture. Although it may be a little bit difficult, the design is attractive.

]]> Comment on Text with Supporting Visuals (The Prototype) by Kenny Tang http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/comment-page-1/#comment-22 Kenny Tang Tue, 08 May 2007 11:38:25 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/05/08/text-with-supporting-visuals-the-prototype/#comment-22 your representation is very nice,clear and neat together. For me, interactive action with viewer would be prominent to attract others, however it is good enough. your representation is very nice,clear and neat together. For me, interactive action with viewer would be prominent to attract others, however it is good enough.

]]> Comment on Textual Content (edited Draft) by Paula Chian http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/24/textual-content-edited-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-21 Paula Chian Mon, 07 May 2007 16:05:36 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/24/textual-content-edited-draft/#comment-21 Yes.. I agree with Ryan.. although the information you got looks good.. your draft looks like it is a very big topic.. i think it will be easier if you narrow down your topic.. I am looking forward to see your prototype.. Yes.. I agree with Ryan.. although the information you got looks good.. your draft looks like it is a very big topic.. i think it will be easier if you narrow down your topic..
I am looking forward to see your prototype..

]]> Comment on Textual Content (edited Draft) by Ryan http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/24/textual-content-edited-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-20 Ryan Thu, 26 Apr 2007 09:22:28 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/24/textual-content-edited-draft/#comment-20 I think you topoc is quite difficult to do. Anyway, look forward to see your final version. Ryan Yue I think you topoc is quite difficult to do.

Anyway, look forward to see your final version.

Ryan Yue

]]> Comment on Textual Content (1st Draft) by Cheung Pui Man (Emily) http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/18/textual-content-1st-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-19 Cheung Pui Man (Emily) Sun, 22 Apr 2007 07:43:11 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/18/textual-content-1st-draft/#comment-19 David, If you present pictures and words in your draft, I think it will be easy for us to understand what your partner and you will design for your final project. I am waiting for seeing your second draft. Emily David,
If you present pictures and words in your draft, I think it will be easy for us to understand what your partner and you will design for your final project. I am waiting for seeing your second draft.

Emily

]]> Comment on Digital Story by Cheung Pui Man (Emily) http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/15/digital-story/comment-page-1/#comment-18 Cheung Pui Man (Emily) Tue, 17 Apr 2007 15:44:36 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/15/digital-story/#comment-18 David, Although this story is nice, I have the same feeling like Ryan. Emily David,

Although this story is nice, I have the same feeling like Ryan.

Emily

]]> Comment on Digital Story by ryan http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/15/digital-story/comment-page-1/#comment-17 ryan Tue, 17 Apr 2007 01:27:26 +0000 http://davidcheng.edublogs.org/2007/04/15/digital-story/#comment-17 A long long story. Anyway, I think the story is attractive. But I find difficult in understanding some of the slides. Ryan yue A long long story. Anyway, I think the story is attractive.

But I find difficult in understanding some of the slides.

Ryan yue

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